Eleonora, good afternoon. There are a number of comments on your exercise. Over the course of several lessons, we studied hard to draw a face, and you did it well. Why are you now drawing these strange dots instead of eyes on the templates? You can not draw the face completely, you can outline the proportions. But it should still be a face, not a mask with two dots.
The length of the hand is equal to the height of the face. You have much smaller hands on all templates. And here the same story is repeated as with the face. In the exercise on small hands, you beautifully and diligently drew good hands. Why are you all forgotten here? Take the exercise with small hands and repeat it several times to reinforce the skill. And when working with a template, take these exercises and accurately copy the hands.
And yet, look at the skeleton and on the muscle diagram, what the clavicle looks like and how it mates with the shoulder joint.