I cannot praise your work yet, because the painting is almost invisible. If the paint is hard on the fabric, try thinning the paint a little with just one drop of water. This will make the painting easier to adhere to the fabric.

But painting is the hardest part of learning. Therefore, I accept the task, you can continue to work.

If you want to practice, you can do this exercise:
On a piece of light-colored fabric, make pale spots with paint, gradually gaining the intensity of the color. Try not to get small strokes of paint so that the gradient is smooth.